8. For the Unity in Writing, Writer Should Focus on Unity of Pronoun, Tense, and Mood

    1. Learn to write by writing. Force yourself to produce a certain number of words on a regular basis.
    2. Writing is a question of solving a problem. A problem may be where to obtain the facts or how to organize the material. Even, it may be a problem of approach or attitude, tone or style. And "it has to be confronted and solved.
    3. "Unity is the anchor of good writing. So, first, get your unities straight. Choose from among the many variables and stick to your choice. "
    4. "One choice is unity of pronoun." Write in first person, as a participant, or in the third person, as an observer, or even in the second person.
    5.  "Unity of tense is another choice." Write in the past tense or in the present tense. But, do not switch back and forth, because it is not agreeable. 
    6. "Another choice is unity of mood." Writer can talk to the reader in the casual voice. Or he can approach the reader with a certain formality to describe a serious event or to present a set of important facts.
    7. "Ask yourself some basic questions before you start."
      • "In what capacity am I going to address the reader?" "(Reporter? Provider of information? Average man or woman?)"
      • "What pronoun and tense am I going to use?"
      • " What style?" "(Impersonal reportorial? Personal but formal? Personal or casual?)"
      • "What attitude am I going to take toward the material?" "(Involved? Detached? Judgmental? Ironic? Amused?)"
      • "How much do I want to cover?" "What one point do I want to make?"

"Every writing project must be reduced before you start to write."

    1. "Think small." "Decide what corner of your subject you're going to bite off, and be content to cover it well and stop."
    2. "Adjust your style accordingly and proceed to whatever destination you reach. Don't ever become the prisoner of a preconceived plan. Writing is no respecter of blueprints."
    3. When the second part of article is badly out of joint with the first, go back to the beginning and rewrite it so that the mood and style are consistent from start to finish.
    4. "There's nothing in such a method to be ashamed of."


These are my summary notes on 'Unity' from a book "On Writing Well" written by William Zinsser.


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8. For the Unity in Writing, Writer Should Focus on Unity of Pronoun, Tense, and Mood

Learn to write by writing. Force yourself to produce a certain number of words on a regular basis. Writing is a question of solving...